http://wordsnatcher.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] wordsnatcher.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] ibuberu 2010-07-03 07:41 pm (UTC)

the red/yellow fic was so cute, oh my god <3
those two will never cease to be adorable

and i quite liked the folkloreshipping fic as well! i thought it was interesting how you characterized kotone - most people seem to write her as fairly chatty & outgoing, so it was intriguing to see it the other way around :)
the only thing i'll say is that the last sentence reads a little awkwardly... but that might just be me. otherwise, very nice job with both of these~

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